自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了年龄和父母送车的背景。注意语法和时态：应说“encourage me to study hard”；讲过去的经历时，用“that was the first bike I had”。另外，“sent me a bike”不太自然，可以改为“bought me a bike”或“gave me a bike”。

示例: Yes, definitely. When I was 12, my parents bought me a bike to encourage me to study hard. It was the first bike I had, and I was thrilled to ride it around my neighborhood.

建议: 回答表达了明确观点，并尝试说明人们骑车通勤的原因。注意使用正确的动词形式：“like riding a bike”或“like to ride a bike”；“driving a car”前需要冠词；并列结构应保持一致。最后的“it can practice”意思不清楚，可以具体说骑车有助于锻炼身体或节省交通费用。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work instead of driving a car or taking public transport. They do this because cycling is a convenient way to get some exercise, especially for short journeys.

× When I was 12 my parents sent me a bike to encourage me study hard, so that's the first bike I have.

✓ When I was 12, my parents sent me a bike to encourage me to study hard, so that was the first bike I had.

“encourage”后接表示人的宾语时，常用结构“encourage someone to do something”，因此应说“encourage me to study”。这里是在讲童年发生的事情，所以“that's”和“I have”应改为过去时“that was”和“I had”。

× When I was 12 my parents sent me a bike to encourage me study hard, so that's the first bike I have.

✓ When I was 12, my parents sent me a bike to encourage me to study hard, so that was the first bike I had.

句子描述的是童年时收到的第一辆自行车，属于过去的经历，因此应使用过去时“was”和“had”，而不是现在时“is”和“have”。

× Yeah, definitely. Many people like ride bike to work instead of driving car or take public transport because they think it can practice.

✓ Yeah, definitely. Many people like riding bikes to work instead of driving cars or taking public transport because they think it is practical.

“like”后可以接动词-ing形式，因此“like ride”应改为“like riding”。“instead of”后也应使用动词-ing形式，所以“take”应改为“taking”。

× Yeah, definitely. Many people like ride bike to work instead of driving car or take public transport because they think it can practice.

✓ Yeah, definitely. Many people like riding bikes to work instead of driving cars or taking public transport because they think it is practical.

这里泛指人们骑自行车、开汽车的普遍情况，应使用复数“bikes”和“cars”。可数名词以单数形式泛指时通常需要冠词；用复数形式可以避免遗漏冠词。