自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense, since the question is about your childhood. Avoid repeating “I really like,” and add one specific detail about riding your bike. For example, mention where you rode it or who you rode with.

示例: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child. I often rode it in the park with my parents, especially at the weekends.

建议: Give a clear opinion about bike popularity in your country, then support it with a specific reason or example. Avoid the unclear phrase “more active here” and repeated use of “abroad.” You could compare cycling in cities with cycling in rural areas.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They’re a convenient way to travel short distances, although many people in larger cities prefer public transport because of the traffic.

× Yes I have a red bike.

✓ Yes, I had a red bike.

The examiner asks about the past with did you have, so use the past-tense form had rather than the present-tense have.

× I really like to go outside with my parents and I really like to ride a bike when I in my childhood.

✓ I really liked going outside with my parents, and I really liked riding a bike when I was a child.

The student is describing childhood activities, which happened in the past. Use liked instead of like to keep the verbs in the past tense.

× when I in my childhood

✓ when I was a child

The original phrase has no verb after I. Add the past-tense verb was to form a complete clause. When I was a child is also a more natural way to express this idea.