自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamak için geçmiş zaman kullanın: “Yes, I did” veya “Yes, I had a bike.” Çocukluğunuzdan kısa ve belirli bir ayrıntı ekleyin; örneğin bisikleti nerede sürdüğünüzü söyleyin. “When I was a child” ifadesini kullanın ve cümlenin dilbilgisel yapısına dikkat edin.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood.

建议: Önce görüşünüzü açık ve doğru bir cümleyle belirtin: “Yes, I think they are popular in my country.” Ardından bunun nedenini açıklayın; örneğin bisikletlerin ulaşım, egzersiz veya çevre açısından faydasından bahsedin. “Because it's so popular” ifadesi nedeni açıklamadığı için, bisikletlerin neden popüler olduğunu belirten somut bir ayrıntı ekleyin.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They are an affordable way to get around and are also useful for exercise.

× Yeah. When and I'm child to I have a wanna bike.

✓ Yeah. When I was a child, I had a bike.

The question asks about the past, so use the past forms was and had instead of I'm and have. Use had to describe possession during childhood.

× Yeah. When and I'm child to I have a wanna bike.

✓ Yeah. When I was a child, I had a bike.

The original clause has an unclear word order and includes words that do not form a grammatical sentence. A clear structure is: When I was a child, I had a bike.

× Yeah, and my country, it's by 'cause it's so popular.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in my country.

Use in to describe something located or popular within a country. And and by do not correctly express this relationship here.

× Yeah, and my country, it's by 'cause it's so popular.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in my country.

The original sentence has an unclear structure and an incomplete or incorrectly formed because clause. State the main idea directly with bikes as the subject and are popular as the predicate.