自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答“有”，并注意过去时和冠词：用“had a bike”和“rode it”。“ride it and work”表达不清楚；如果想说骑车去上学或上班，请明确说明目的地。最后可以补充一个具体回忆，让回答更自然、完整。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school almost every day, and I have fond memories of exploring my neighborhood with my friends.

建议: 回答与问题相关，但“bikes”是复数，应用“they”；“in these years”不自然，可改为“in recent years”。后半句含义不清，且“write my best goal”不符合语境。建议说明自行车为什么越来越受欢迎，再用具体理由或例子展开；如果想表达自己两年没骑车，可以说“I haven’t ridden a bike for two years”。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country. In recent years, more people have been cycling because it’s an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially in crowded cities. I haven’t ridden a bike for two years, though, because I’ve been busy with my business.

× Yes, I have bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”指过去的时间，因此动词“have”应改为过去式“had”。

× Yes, I have bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

“bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。建议检查可数名词单数前是否缺少冠词。

× I always ride it and work and it's a really happy time.

✓ I always rode it and worked, and it was a really happy time.

这句话描述的是童年时期的经历，应使用过去时：“ride”改为“rode”，“work”改为“worked”，“is”改为“was”。讲述过去的事情时，要保持相关动词的时态一致。

× It's more and more popular in these years,

✓ Bikes are becoming more and more popular these days,

这里讨论的是复数名词“bikes”，不能用单数代词“It”和单数动词“is”指代。应使用“Bikes are”或“They are”，并保持主谓一致。

× It's more and more popular in these years,

✓ Bikes are becoming more and more popular these days,

“these years”前通常不加“in”来表达“近来”。这里可用“these days”；也可以说“in recent years”。

× but I don't write my best goal for two years I'm so busy for my business

✓ But I haven't ridden my bike much in the past two years because I'm so busy with my business.

“过去两年一直没怎么骑车”表示从过去持续到现在的情况，应使用现在完成时“haven't ridden”，而不是一般现在时“don't”。

× but I don't write my best goal for two years I'm so busy for my business

✓ But I haven't ridden my bike much in the past two years because I'm so busy with my business.

表示“忙于某事”时，固定搭配是“be busy with something”，所以应使用“with”，而不是“for”。

× but I don't write my best goal for two years I'm so busy for my business

✓ But I haven't ridden my bike much in the past two years because I'm so busy with my business.

原句把两个意思相关的分句直接连在一起，缺少清楚的连接方式。这里用“because”连接原因和结果，说明不常骑车是因为忙于生意。