自行车— Part 1 评分报告

练习Part12026-10-17 20:31:27

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Part 1

考官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

考生

No, I didn't have one.

考官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

考生

No, I didn't think bikes are popular in my country because my country there are so many persons and everyone has car, you understand?

评估

总分

总分: 5.0流畅度与连贯性: 5.0发音: 5.0语法: 5.0词汇: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

分数: 78.0

建议: 回答直接且语法正确,但内容略短。可以补充一个具体原因或相关细节,例如小时候更常用什么交通工具;控制在一到两句即可。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents usually drove me to school, so I never really needed one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

分数: 42.0

建议: 先直接回答问题,并使用一般现在时表达当前看法(“I don’t think…”)。注意语法和搭配:“there are”后可用“a lot of people”,“everyone has a car”;不要说“you understand?”,可用具体例子或对比来补充原因。

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. There are a lot of people, and many of them prefer to drive because cars are more convenient for commuting.

语法

6: Present tense issue(一般现在时态错误)

× No, I didn't think bikes are popular in my country because my country there are so many persons and everyone has car, you understand?

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there are so many people in my country and everyone has a car, you understand?

问题类型:现在时态错误。这里回答的是对自行车在本国是否受欢迎的当前看法,因此应使用一般现在时“don't think”,而不是表示过去的“didn't think”。回答当前观点时,要注意与问题中的一般现在时保持一致。

3: There be issue(There be句型错误)

× No, I didn't think bikes are popular in my country because my country there are so many persons and everyone has car, you understand?

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there are so many people in my country and everyone has a car, you understand?

问题类型:There be句型错误。“There are”应放在句首引出“存在很多人”,地点短语“in my country”放在其后。原句“my country there are”语序不正确。可以使用“There are + 名词 + 地点”结构,例如“There are many people in my country”。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× No, I didn't think bikes are popular in my country because my country there are so many persons and everyone has car, you understand?

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there are so many people in my country and everyone has a car, you understand?

问题类型:冠词错误。“car”是可数名词单数,前面通常需要冠词;这里应说“has a car”。说英语时,遇到单数可数名词时,记得检查前面是否需要“a”或“the”。

重点词汇

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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