自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and directly answers the question, but it repeats the wording of the question and gives no supporting detail. Add one specific memory or explain how you used the bike.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

建议: You answer the question, but avoid repeating yourself and correct the phrase “the most of people” to “most people.” Support your opinion with a specific reason or example, such as how people use bikes in your country.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work or school, especially in busy cities where cycling can be more convenient than driving.

× Actually, yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country, the most of people, most people have bikes.

✓ Actually, yes. I think bikes are popular in my country; most people have bikes.

Use most directly before a plural noun: most people. The phrase the most of people is incorrect. You can also say most of the people when referring to a specific group. The repeated phrase most people have bikes has been removed for clarity.