自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答表达不清楚，语法也不自然。先直接说明小时候有没有自行车；如果有，可以补充是谁买的、骑车的经历或骑车的地点。注意使用过去时，例如“我小时候有一辆自行车”可说“I had a bike when I was a child.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a small blue one, and I often rode it around our neighbourhood.

建议: 句子不完整，且没有清楚回答问题。先说明自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎，再用一个具体原因或例子展开。注意使用完整句，并避免重复题目中的“your country”。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances, and many people use them to get to work or school.

× Yes, I am by glory as a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

问题询问的是童年时的情况，因此回答应使用过去时。原句中的“I am”是现在时，应改为“I had”。建议谈论过去经历时，注意使用动词的过去式。

× This is value popular in your country because

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country.

修饰形容词“popular”需要使用副词“very”；“value”不能在这里修饰“popular”。建议用“very popular”表示“非常受欢迎”。

× This is value popular in your country because

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country.

学生是在回答自己国家的情况，因此应说“my country”，而不是“your country”。建议根据说话者和听话者的身份选择物主代词。