自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答方向是合适的，但有两处明显语法问题：如果想表达“我有一辆自行车”，应说“I had one”，而不是“I hide it”；“买给我”需要加宾语，应该说“bought it for me”。建议先直接回答，再补充一个简单细节，例如自行车的颜色或你常骑它做什么。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me, and I often rode it around our neighborhood.

建议: 你直接表达了肯定态度，也给出了观察作为理由。不过，“bikes”是复数，后面应使用“them”，而不是“it”；“see them in the street”也不够具体。可以说明你通常在哪里看到自行车，以及人们用它们做什么，让回答更有说服力。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them on the streets, especially in busy city centers. Many people use bikes for short trips because they are convenient.

× Yes I hide it.

✓ Yes, I had one.

问题：hide 是一般现在时，不能表达童年时拥有自行车这一过去的情况。应使用 have 的过去式 had。改为 one 可以避免与前文重复 bike。

× My dad bought for me.

✓ My dad bought it for me.

问题：bought 后缺少表示“买了什么”的宾语。此处用代词 it 指代前面提到的自行车。建议检查及物动词后是否需要补充宾语。

× Of course, I usually see it in the street.

✓ Of course, I usually see them in the street.

问题：it 是单数代词，但此处的 bikes 指多辆自行车，应使用复数代词 them。建议确保代词的单复数与它所指代的名词一致。