自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了自行车颜色这一细节。注意题目问的是过去的经历，因此应使用过去时：将“have”改为“had”，将“is”改为“was”。“a princess ride”表达不自然，可以说“a princess’s bike”或“fit for a princess”。建议用完整句子表达，并用连接词补充感受或用途。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a pink bike that looked like a princess’s bike, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

建议: 你直接表达了观点，并尝试用同学的情况举例，但“get scrule on foot”不清楚且不符合英语习惯。如果想表达“步行上学”，可以说“go to school on foot”或“walk to school”。回答国家情况时，可以先直接表明观点，再用同学的例子说明，并补充一个简短原因。

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, most of my classmates walk to school instead of cycling, probably because they live nearby.

× Of course I have and my bike is pink it looks like a princess ride

✓ Of course I did, and my bike was pink. It looked like a princess ride.

问题问的是过去（“Did you have…?”），所以回答和描述童年时的自行车也应使用一般过去时。这里应将 “I have” 改为 “I did”，将 “is” 改为 “was”，将 “looks” 改为 “looked”。