自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提到了年龄、礼物和骑车经历，但有多处词语和语法错误，影响理解。可以说“a small bike”“a birthday present”“used it to ride”和“training wheels”。注意讲过去的经历时统一使用过去时，例如“used to”“bought”“rode”“learned”。把细节按“什么时候有车—谁送的—用它做什么”组织起来，避免用“And”开头连接句子。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was about seven, and my parents gave it to me as a birthday present. I used to ride it around the neighborhood with my friends. That summer, I also learned to ride without training wheels.

建议: 回答开头表达了观点，但后面的内容难以理解，且“bag”“rise rice”等词与问题不符。请明确说“bikes”，并用一个具体理由或场景支持观点，例如提到人们骑车通勤、锻炼或短途出行。注意使用正确表达“ride bikes”，并避免加入与问题无关或意思不清的内容。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. In many cities, people use them for short trips or to get to work. I often see bike-sharing bicycles near subway stations, which makes cycling very convenient.

× I use it ride around the neighborhood with my friends.

✓ I used it to ride around the neighborhood with my friends.

这段经历发生在过去，前文也使用了过去时“bought”，因此这里的“use”应改为过去式“used”。另外，“use”后接表示用途的动作时，通常用“use + 宾语 + to do”，所以应说“used it to ride”。

× I use it ride around the neighborhood with my friends.

✓ I used it to ride around the neighborhood with my friends.

“use it ride”缺少不定式标记“to”，结构不完整。表示“用它来做某事”时，应使用“use + 宾语 + to do”，例如“use it to ride”。

× I learn to ride without chaining wheels in the summer.

✓ I learned to ride without chaining wheels in the summer.

这里是在讲童年时发生的事情，应使用一般过去时。“learn”的过去式是“learned”（英式英语也可写作“learnt”），不能使用一般现在时“learn”。