自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense throughout: “I didn’t have” and “my cousins had.” Use “bike,” not “bite,” and clarify that you borrowed or rode your cousins’ bikes. Add one relevant detail, such as where you rode them.

示例: I didn’t have a bike of my own when I was a child, but my cousins had one that I could borrow. I often rode it around their neighborhood when I visited them.

建议: Give a clear yes-or-no opinion first, then explain it with a relevant reason or example. Use “the pandemic” and “bikes” correctly, and avoid the unfinished phrase “because I don't know what almost.” Keep your answer focused and use a linking phrase such as “for example” or “as a result.”

示例: Yes, I think bikes have become more popular in my country, especially since the pandemic. Many people started cycling for exercise and as a convenient way to get around. For example, I often see more cyclists on the roads and in parks than I used to.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child, but my cousins have a bite so that's what I use when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my cousins had a bike, so that's what I used when I was a child.

The sentence describes a situation in the past, so use the past-tense forms didn't have, had, and used rather than don't have, have, and use. I interpreted bite as the intended word bike.

× I think pandemic had made a huge contribution why Vac has become popular in our country right now because I don't know what almost.

✓ I think the pandemic has made a huge contribution to why bikes have become popular in our country right now. I'm not sure exactly why.

Use the definite article the before pandemic when referring to the specific pandemic. The ending is unclear, so I'm not sure exactly why is a grammatical way to express uncertainty without changing the likely meaning. I interpreted Vac as bikes.

× I think pandemic had made a huge contribution why Vac has become popular in our country right now because I don't know what almost.

✓ I think the pandemic has made a huge contribution to why bikes have become popular in our country right now. I'm not sure exactly why.

The expression is make a contribution to something, so to is needed before why. Use this preposition pattern when explaining what caused or supported a change.

× I think pandemic had made a huge contribution why Vac has become popular in our country right now because I don't know what almost.

✓ I think the pandemic has made a huge contribution to why bikes have become popular in our country right now. I'm not sure exactly why.

The speaker describes an effect that is relevant right now, so the present perfect has made is more appropriate than the past perfect had made. The past perfect normally needs another past event as a reference point.