自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 質問に直接答えられていますが、「when I was child」は「when I was a child」、「has has」は過去の話なので「had」とします。また、「rode ... and exploring」は形がそろっていないため、「rode ... and explored」のように過去形で統一しましょう。自転車の特徴と、友達と公園で過ごしたことを簡潔につなげると、より自然で伝わりやすくなります。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It had a little basket at the front, and I often rode it to the park with my friends. We would explore the area and enjoy spending time outdoors.

建议: 「Yes, but」は質問への答えと反対の内容を続ける場合に使うため、ここでは「Yes, they are.」が自然です。「getting popular and popular」は「becoming increasingly popular」、「environment detraction」は「environmental awareness」などに言い換えましょう。また、自転車が健康に良いという理由を加えると、回答が明確になります。

示例: Yes, bikes are becoming increasingly popular in my country. More people are choosing to cycle because they are becoming more concerned about the environment. Cycling is also a healthy and affordable way to get around.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child.

× The bike has has a little basket at the front and I rode it to the park with my friend and exploring and enjoying the area.

✓ The bike had a little basket at the front, and I rode it to the park with my friend and explored and enjoyed the area.

The answer describes a childhood memory, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Change has to had, and use explored and enjoyed to coordinate these actions with rode. Also remove the repeated has.

× Yes, but the bikes are getting popular and popular these days because the sentiment of environment detraction is bigger and bigger and bicycle is Hercy also.

✓ Yes, but the bikes are getting more and more popular these days because the sentiment of environment detraction is bigger and bigger, and bicycle is Hercy also.

To describe a gradual increase in popularity, use the comparative form more and more popular, rather than popular and popular.

× Yes, but the bikes are getting popular and popular these days because the sentiment of environment detraction is bigger and bigger and bicycle is Hercy also.

✓ Yes, but the bikes are getting more and more popular these days because the sentiment of environment detraction is bigger and bigger, and a bicycle is Hercy also.

Bicycle is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Add a before bicycle.