自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 질문에 직접 답해 자연스럽지만, 답변이 짧아 구체적인 정보가 부족합니다. 자전거를 언제 탔는지, 어디에서 탔는지 또는 자전거를 타며 무엇을 즐겼는지 한 가지 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 해 보세요.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I especially enjoyed cycling with my friends.

建议: 자전거가 인기 있다는 점은 답했지만, 문법과 표현을 다듬어야 합니다. 여러 대의 자전거를 뜻할 때는 “bikes”라고 하고, “a lot of kids have bike”는 “a lot of kids have bikes”로 고치세요. 또한 “so we can go to park and enjoy”는 누가 무엇을 즐기는지 불분명하므로, 공원까지 자전거를 타고 가는 이유나 활동을 구체적으로 설명해 보세요.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many kids ride them to nearby parks, where they can play with their friends and enjoy the outdoors.

× Yes a lot of kids have bike so we can go to park and enjoy

✓ Yes, a lot of kids have bikes, so we can go to the park and enjoy ourselves.

The plural subject kids refers to multiple bicycles, so bike should be bikes. Use the plural form when referring to bicycles in general.

× Yes a lot of kids have bike so we can go to park and enjoy

✓ Yes, a lot of kids have bikes, so we can go to the park and enjoy ourselves.

Use the before park when referring to a park as a place people go to. The phrase go to park is not grammatically correct in this context.

× Yes a lot of kids have bike so we can go to park and enjoy

✓ Yes, a lot of kids have bikes, so we can go to the park and enjoy ourselves.

Enjoy is generally followed by an object. Here, ourselves refers to the people going to the park and completes the sentence. You could also say enjoy the visit.