自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充父母买车的原因。注意讲过去经历时使用过去式，例如将“buy”改为“bought”；“a good sports”应改为“a good way to exercise”或“a good form of exercise”。“my parents pose it”表达不清，可改为“my parents thought it would encourage me to exercise more”。

示例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t very interested in team sports. They thought cycling would be a fun way for me to get more exercise.

建议: 开头可以直接回答“Definitely, they are.”之后说明自行车受欢迎的原因，并用具体细节展开。注意泛指时用复数“bikes”；“environment friendly”建议写作“environmentally friendly”。“go to walk by bike”和“you can cost a lot”表达不自然；可说“people cycle to get around”以及“it costs much less than taking a taxi”。

示例: Definitely. Bikes are popular in my country because they’re convenient and environmentally friendly. Many people cycle for short trips, especially when the roads are busy. It’s also much cheaper than taking a taxi.

× When I was a child my parents buy a bike for me.

✓ When I was a child, my parents bought a bike for me.

句子描述的是童年时发生的事情，动词应使用过去式。buy 的过去式是 bought。

× It's a good sports for me.

✓ It's a good sport for me.

冠词 a 后面应接单数可数名词，因此 sports 应改为单数 sport。

× Bike is a good way for me to exercise.

✓ A bike is a good way for me to exercise.

这里用单数可数名词 bike 泛指自行车，需要在前面加不定冠词 a。

× And my parents pose it they want me to take more.

✓ And my parents bought it because they wanted me to exercise more.

原句中 pose it 和 they want me to take more 之间缺少清楚的连接，句子结构不完整。可以用 because 连接原因和结果，并补全表达“多锻炼”的意思。

× Bike is so convenient and environment friendly.

✓ A bike is so convenient and environment friendly.

bike 是单数可数名词，这里泛指自行车时，前面需要加不定冠词 a。

× Bike is so convenient and environment friendly.

✓ A bike is so convenient and environmentally friendly.

修饰形容词 friendly 时应使用副词 environmentally，而不是形容词 environment。

× Most people chose to go to walk by bike.

✓ Most people choose to travel by bike.

这里是在描述现在普遍存在的习惯，应使用一般现在时。主语 most people 是复数，所以用 choose，而不是过去式 chose。

× Most people chose to go to walk by bike.

✓ Most people choose to travel by bike.

go to walk by bike 的结构不自然且表达重复。可改为 choose to travel by bike，清楚表达“选择骑自行车出行”。

× It cost a few money compared with the taxi and so flexible.

✓ It costs a little money compared with taking a taxi, and it is very flexible.

一般现在时中，主语 it 是第三人称单数，因此动词 cost 应加 -s，写作 costs。

× It cost a few money compared with the taxi and so flexible.

✓ It costs a little money compared with taking a taxi, and it is very flexible.

money 是不可数名词，不能用 a few 修饰。表示少量时应使用 a little。

× It cost a few money compared with the taxi and so flexible.

✓ It costs a little money compared with taking a taxi, and it is very flexible.

and so flexible 缺少主语和谓语，不能构成完整分句。应补上主语 it 和系动词 is，写成 and it is very flexible。