自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand and does not clearly say whether you had a bike. Start with a direct “Yes” or “No,” use the past tense, and add one brief detail, such as how you used the bike.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

建议: You give a general opinion and an example, but the answer is hesitant and the ideas are not linked clearly. Say directly whether bikes are popular, use the plural “students,” and explain that you see many people cycling. The sentence about your commute is not necessary unless you connect it to your opinion.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see students riding them to school, especially in the morning. I usually commute to work by another means of transport, though.

× Let's you have a buy when you were child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence does not form a grammatical answer to the question. Use a clear subject and verb, and answer the question in the past tense: Yes, I had a bike. The word buy should be bike in this context.

× Let's you have a buy when you were child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Use the article a before child because child is a singular countable noun. For example, say when I was a child.

× Maybe just, uh, everywhere When I go outside I can see a lot of student and I don't go to the work by bike.

✓ Maybe. When I go outside, I can see a lot of students everywhere, and I don't go to work by bike.

After a lot of, use the plural form students when referring to multiple people. Remember to add -s to regular plural nouns.

× Maybe just, uh, everywhere When I go outside I can see a lot of student and I don't go to the work by bike.

✓ Maybe. When I go outside, I can see a lot of students everywhere, and I don't go to work by bike.

Work does not normally take the in the phrase go to work when referring to the general activity of working. Say I go to work, not I go to the work.