自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答“有”，再用一到两句补充具体经历。注意时态：讲童年经历要用过去时，例如用“had”“rode”或“used to”；“biker”是指骑自行车的人，这里应使用“ride”。避免重复词语，并用完整句子结束回答。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a little girl. My father often rode with me, and sometimes we cycled to school together.

建议: 先明确表达自行车在你们国家是否流行，再说明原因。注意使用准确词汇，例如“bicycles are not very popular”和“cars are a common way to get around”；避免重复“popular”，并用清晰、完整的句子表达观点。

示例: Bikes aren’t very popular in my country because many people prefer to travel by car. Cars are more convenient, especially for longer journeys.

× I have a bike when I was a little girl.

✓ I had a bike when I was a little girl.

句子描述的是过去的经历，且从句使用了过去时“was”，因此主句中的“have”也应使用过去式“had”。

× My father always biker, always, always, always ride it with me.

✓ My father always rode it with me.

这句话讲的是小时候发生的事情，应使用过去时。“ride”的过去式是“rode”。原句中的重复词和“biker”不构成正确的动词表达；可以直接说“rode it”。

× We will take the boy here to go to school.

✓ We would take it to go to school.

上下文描述的是过去的习惯，因此不应使用表示将来的“will”。描述过去经常做的事情，可以用“would”加动词原形。这里用“it”指代前文提到的自行车。

× If I could both bike are not familiar in our country.

✓ I think bikes are not familiar in our country.

原句开头的“If I could”没有构成完整、合理的条件句，并且与后面的主句衔接不当。可改为“I think”引出观点。

× Both bike are not familiar in our country.

✓ Bikes are not familiar in our country.

这里泛指自行车，应使用复数“bikes”。“both”通常表示“两者都”，需要有明确的两个对象；此处泛指时应删去“both”。

× 'Cause we have the car in the normal where the car is the popular way to it's a popular popular toy to go anywhere.

✓ Because cars are the norm in our country, they are a popular way to get around.

原句把多个意思不完整、衔接混乱的部分连在一起，形成了不清楚的句子结构。可以将意思整理为两个连贯的分句，并用“because”引出原因。

× We have the car in the normal where the car is the popular way to go anywhere.

✓ Cars are the norm, and they are a popular way to go anywhere.

这里泛指汽车，不是指某一辆特定的汽车，因此不应使用单数“the car”。泛指时应使用复数“cars”。