自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ξεκίνησε με σαφή απάντηση: «Yes, I did» αντί για «Yes, I had», καθώς η ερώτηση χρησιμοποιεί το ρήμα «have». Πες «the mountains» και χρησιμοποίησε τη φυσική έκφραση «go on bike rides». Μπορείς να προσθέσεις μια συγκεκριμένη λεπτομέρεια για τις βόλτες σας.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often went on bike rides in the mountains with my family. It was a fun way to spend time together.

建议: Απάντησε πρώτα άμεσα και κάνε τη σύγκριση με φυσική δομή, όπως «not as popular as in the Netherlands». Το «Holand» γράφεται «Holland», αλλά σε αυτό το πλαίσιο είναι πιο ακριβές να πεις «the Netherlands». Η φράση «we're usually transformed with passes» δεν είναι κατανοητή· χρησιμοποίησε «people usually travel by bus or car». Εξήγησε με σαφήνεια αν αναφέρεσαι στη χρήση ποδηλάτων ή στην έλλειψη ποδηλατικών υποδομών.

示例: I don’t think bikes are as popular in Greece as they are in the Netherlands. Many people usually travel by bus or car, and cycling infrastructure is limited in some areas. As a result, fewer people use bikes for everyday journeys.

× Yes, I had and I always went to mountains with my family for bike rides.

✓ Yes, I had one, and I always went to the mountains with my family for bike rides.

The verb had needs an object here because the student is referring to a bike mentioned in the question. Use one to avoid repeating bike. For example, say I had one.

× Yes, I had and I always went to mountains with my family for bike rides.

✓ Yes, I had one, and I always went to the mountains with my family for bike rides.

Use the before mountains when referring to the mountains as a particular destination or natural area. A useful pattern is go to the mountains.

× I live in Greece, so bikes are not very popular like Holand or other countries because in this country we're usually transformed with passes or cars and we don't have bikes.

✓ I live in Greece, so bikes are not as popular as they are in Holland or other countries because in this country we're usually transformed with passes or cars and we don't have bikes.

The comparison should be between how popular bikes are in Greece and how popular they are in other countries. Use not as popular as they are, rather than not very popular like followed by the name of a country.