自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中“bag”与问题不符，可能是想说“bike”；请直接回答是否有自行车，并解释原因。表达“小时候总是害怕”时用“I was always afraid”，语序更自然。可以补充具体原因或感受，但注意控制在五句以内。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was always afraid of falling off. I thought it might hurt, so I preferred to walk.

建议: 回答切题，也提供了观察到的细节。描述普遍现象时，“I often see many people riding bikes”比“I always see many people ride the bikes”更自然；这里通常不需要在“bikes”前加“the”。可以再补充一个具体原因或场景，让回答更充分。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them on the roads, especially in the city centre. They’re a convenient and affordable way to get around.

× No, I didn't have a bag because when I was a child I always was afraid of falling off the bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bag because when I was a child, I was always afraid of falling off the bike.

句中 always 修饰 be 动词 was 时，通常放在 be 动词之后，因此应说 “I was always afraid”，而不是 “I always was afraid”。

× Yes, in my country I always see many people ride the bikes on the road.

✓ Yes, in my country I always see many people ride bikes on the road.

这里泛指人们骑自行车，不是指某些特定的自行车，因此 bikes 前不需要定冠词 the。泛指复数名词时通常直接使用复数形式。