自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời hiện khó hiểu vì nhiều từ bị lặp hoặc dùng sai, nên chưa truyền đạt rõ bạn có xe đạp hay không và đã sử dụng nó như thế nào. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ: “Yes, I had a bike.” Sau đó nêu một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn bạn đạp xe đến trường hoặc chơi với bạn bè. Dùng “rode my bike” thay vì “apply” hoặc “play around” nếu muốn nói về việc đạp xe.

示例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school and played on it with my friends after class.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời “Yes”, nhưng phần giải thích còn khó hiểu và có lỗi ngữ pháp như “our citizen have a one” và “ride by”. Hãy dùng danh từ số nhiều “people/citizens” và cấu trúc “many people own a bike” hoặc “people are used to riding bikes”. Nêu một lý do rõ ràng, chẳng hạn xe đạp được dùng để tập thể dục trong công viên. Tránh lặp “used to” và dùng “ride bikes” thay cho “ride by”.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people own one because cycling is an easy way to exercise, especially in parks and along quiet streets.

× Yes, uh, I, I have my motto, uh, bowl a pie for me. Uh, I will apply, uh, to go to school and uh, they play around with my friends.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I went to school and played around with my friends.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change have to had, will apply to went, and play to played. The transcript also appears to contain misrecognized words, so use the intended meaning when giving your answer.

× Yes, I do absolutely, uh, our citizen have a one pie in your house because everyone's used to, uh, used to ride by, uh, do exercise in the park.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Our citizens have one bike in their houses because everyone is used to riding bikes and exercising in the park.

Our refers to more than one person, so use the plural noun citizens rather than citizen. The plural noun agrees with have. Use their houses to refer to the houses belonging to the citizens.

× Our citizen have a one pie in your house.

✓ Our citizens have one bike in their houses.

One already expresses the quantity, so do not use a before it. Say one bike, not a one bike.

× Our citizen have a one pie in your house.

✓ Our citizens have one bike in their houses.

Your refers to the person being addressed, but the sentence refers to the citizens. Use their to show that the houses belong to those citizens.

× Everyone's used to, uh, used to ride by, uh, do exercise in the park.

✓ Everyone is used to riding bikes and exercising in the park.

When used to means accustomed to, to is a preposition and must be followed by a noun or a verb ending in -ing. Therefore, use riding and exercising, not ride and do.