自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了父亲买车和周末骑车的细节。建议删去重复的“when I was a child”，并避免“me and my so my family and I”这样的自我修正；可用“My family and I”作主语。“expensive”与骑车经历的关联不强，可以补充自行车的特点或你当时的感受。控制在两到三句，让表达更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a really nice bike, and my family and I used to ride along the riverside on weekends. It was a fun way to exercise and spend time together.

建议: 你表达了明确观点，并用河边自行车道解释自行车受欢迎的原因。注意主谓一致：问题中的“bikes”是复数，应回答“Yes, they are”。“bike path”和“bicycle”需要使用复数或加冠词；“compared to ride”可改为“rather than riding”。删去重复的“on the”和多余的“And so”，并用一个连接词把设施与安全性联系起来。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Taiwan. The government has built bike paths along rivers, so people can ride safely away from busy roads. They are especially popular with people who want to exercise or relax outdoors.

× So me and my so my family and I could enjoy cycling along the riverside on weekends to exercise and relax.

✓ My dad bought me a really expensive bicycle when I was a child, so my family and I could enjoy cycling along the riverside on weekends to exercise and relax.

在句子中作主语时应使用主格“I”，不能使用宾格“me”。原句中的“me and my”是未完成的自我修正，应删去。可记住：人称代词作主语时用主格，如“I”，“we”；作宾语时用宾格，如“me”，“us”。

× So me and my so my family and I could enjoy cycling along the riverside on weekends to exercise and relax.

✓ My dad bought me a really expensive bicycle when I was a child, so my family and I could enjoy cycling along the riverside on weekends to exercise and relax.

“So my family and I could...”在这里是表示结果或目的的从句，单独作为句子时缺少主句。可以将它与前面的主句合并，并用逗号加“so”连接，使句子结构完整。

× Yes, it is.

✓ Yes, they are.

问题中的主语是复数“bikes”，回答时应使用复数代词“they”和复数动词“are”。可先确认问句中的主语是单数还是复数，再让回答中的代词和动词与之对应。

× The government has built bike path along the riverside for people to exercise and relax.

✓ The government has built a bike path along the riverside for people to exercise and relax.

“path”是单数可数名词，前面需要限定词。这里可加不定冠词“a”。单数可数名词通常不能单独使用。

× And so there is a place for people to ride bicycle safely compared to ride the bike on the on the road.

✓ There is a place for people to ride bicycles safely, compared with riding on the road.

泛指人们骑自行车时，通常用复数“bicycles”，而不是没有冠词的单数“bicycle”。泛指一类事物时，可以使用可数名词复数形式。

× And so there is a place for people to ride bicycle safely compared to ride the bike on the on the road.

✓ There is a place for people to ride bicycles safely, compared with riding on the road.

“compared with”后面接动名词短语时，动词应使用“-ing”形式，因此“ride”应改为“riding”。可将“compared with”后面的内容视为名词或动名词短语。

× So I think Taiwanese people do enjoy riding bicycle.

✓ So I think Taiwanese people do enjoy riding bicycles.

这里是在泛指骑自行车这项活动中的自行车，应用可数名词复数“bicycles”。泛指一类可数物品时，通常使用复数形式。