自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答过去的情况，注意使用过去时：用“had / bought / rode”，而不是“have / ride”。表达年龄时说“when I was six”，并补上正确宾语“bought me one”。避免重复和自我修正；“骑车让我变强壮”可说“it made me stronger”。可以按“直接回答＋具体回忆＋感受”的顺序组织，控制在三句左右。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought me one when I was six, and I often rode it with my friends. We had a lot of fun together, and cycling helped me become stronger.

建议: 先明确回答自行车在你所在国家是否受欢迎。描述趋势时可用“More and more people are taking up cycling”，不要说“people join the activity”。删掉重复的“I think for me”和“I like”，并注意“它是我的主要户外活动”应表达为“it's one of my main outdoor activities”。可补充一个具体原因，例如健身、通勤或和朋友出游。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, and more and more people are taking up cycling. I enjoy riding with my friends, especially at weekends. It’s a fun way to exercise and one of my favourite outdoor activities.

× Yes I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的情况，时间在过去，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。

× My father bought me a in my in my 6 years old.

✓ My father bought me one when I was six years old.

“bought me a”后面缺少名词，句子结构不完整；此处可用 one 代指前文的 bike。另外，表达年龄应说“when I was six years old”，不能说“in my six years old”。

× I don't always ride a bike with my friends and makes nice memories with them.

✓ I didn't always ride bikes with my friends and made nice memories with them.

这部分是在描述童年时期的经历，应使用过去时。don't 应改为 didn't，makes 应改为 made。

× It also made me strengthen.

✓ It also made me stronger.

这里表达的是骑车使“我”变得更强壮，应使用形容词 stronger。strengthen 是动词，不能直接用于 made me 后表达这种状态变化。

× There are more and more people join the activity of riding bikes.

✓ More and more people are taking part in cycling activities.

There are 后面不能直接接一个带谓语动词的完整分句“people join”。可以改用“More and more people are joining...”，也可以说“there are more and more people who join...”。

× I think for me, I like riding bikes I like I like riding bikes with my friends now and it's my outdoor the main outdoor activities.

✓ I like riding bikes with my friends now, and it's my main outdoor activity.

原句有重复和中断，导致句子结构不清楚；“my outdoor the main outdoor activities”也不是完整、自然的名词短语。建议删除重复部分，并使用清晰的句子结构。

× It's my outdoor the main outdoor activities.

✓ It's my main outdoor activity.

主语 it 是单数，因此这里应使用单数 activity，而不是复数 activities。同时，形容词 main 应放在名词 activity 前面。