自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，再补充童年骑车的经历和买车的原因。第一句“and my childhood back then”语法和意思都不清楚；可改为“I had a bicycle when I was a child”。回忆过去时要保持一致，例如把“enjoy”改为“enjoyed”。“Me, my family and I”重复且不自然，可简化为“My family and I”。

示例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My family and I often rode along the riverside on weekends, so my dad bought me a really nice bike. I have fond memories of those rides.

建议: 回答方向明确，也提到了自行车道这一具体原因，但结尾“That's why Taiwanese people”是不完整的句子，需要补全或删除。把“when there are in their spare time”改为“in their spare time”，并避免重复使用“enjoy biking / enjoy riding bikes”。说明政府修建车道时，可用一般现在时“has built”或“provides”，使表达更自然。

示例: Yes, cycling is quite popular in Taiwan, especially on weekends. Many people ride along the riverside paths in their free time. The government has built dedicated bike lanes, so cycling is safer and more convenient.

× Yes, I did have a bicycle and my childhood back then.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child.

“A bicycle”和“my childhood”不能直接用“and”连接；原句的结构不完整。可以用“when I was a child”表达“小时候”，使句子结构清晰。

× Me, my family and I enjoy riding bicycles along the Riverside on the weekends, so my dad bought me a really nice bicycle at that time.

✓ My family and I enjoyed riding bicycles along the Riverside on the weekends, so my dad bought me a really nice bicycle at that time.

“Me”是宾格，不能在这里充当主语；而“My family and I”已经包含说话者，因此“Me”也造成了重复。主语应写作“My family and I”。

× Me, my family and I enjoy riding bicycles along the Riverside on the weekends, so my dad bought me a really nice bicycle at that time.

✓ My family and I enjoyed riding bicycles along the Riverside on the weekends, so my dad bought me a really nice bicycle at that time.

这句话描述的是童年时期发生的事情，且后半句使用了过去式“bought”，所以前半句的“enjoy”也应使用过去式“enjoyed”，以保持时态一致。

× Yes, I believe that most Taiwanese people enjoy biking on the weekends or when there are in their spare time because the government built some bicycle paths along the Riverside so people can enjoy riding bikes safely.

✓ Yes, I believe that most Taiwanese people enjoy biking on the weekends or when they have spare time because the government built some bicycle paths along the Riverside so people can enjoy riding bikes safely.

“There are”后面通常需要接名词，用来表示“有……”。这里要表达的是“他们有空时”，应使用“they have spare time”，不能用“there are”。

× That's why Taiwanese people.

✓ That's why Taiwanese people enjoy biking.

原句中的“Taiwanese people”后面没有谓语动词，句子意思没有完整表达。应补上动词短语，例如“enjoy biking”，说明台湾人因此会做什么。