自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then add one relevant reason or detail. Correct the past-tense phrase “When I were” to “When I was,” and use the natural expression “I’d like to try riding one.” Avoid repeating that you do not own a bike unless it adds useful information.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, and I still don’t own one. I’ve never learned to ride, but I’d like to try it someday because cycling seems like a fun way to get around.

建议: Give a clear yes-or-no response first, then explain how bike use differs between your country and where you live now. Avoid restarting phrases and filler words, and use accurate forms such as “more popular among men than women,” “when I moved here,” and “people are used to riding bikes.” Add a specific example if you can.

示例: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among men, although fewer women tend to ride them. Where I live now, cycling seems more common overall. For example, I often see people riding bikes to work or run errands.

× When I were a child, I didn't have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The subject I takes was, not were, in the simple past tense. Match the verb form to the subject: I was, but you/we/they were.

× Actually your bike isn't, it is popular, but for a man, not women, uh, in my country, uh, but when I move here, it's very popular.

✓ Actually, bike riding isn't popular among women in my country, but it is popular among men. When I moved here, I found that it was very popular.

The speaker describes moving to a place in the past, so use the simple past moved rather than move. The correction also uses past-tense was to keep the description consistent with that past time. Use the phrase among men/women to describe which groups an activity is popular with.

× Uh, it's, and people used, are used to, uh, riding a bike everyday.

✓ People are used to riding bikes every day.

The final intended phrase is are used to riding, which is grammatical; used to here means accustomed to and is followed by a noun or an -ing form. Every day means each day and is written as two words; everyday is an adjective, as in everyday activities.

× So that's interest.

✓ So that's interesting.

Interest is a noun, but this sentence needs an adjective to describe the situation. Use interesting to mean that something is engaging or noteworthy.