自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了母亲帮助你练习的细节，但时间表达“until my teenager”不正确，可改为“when I was a teenager”。注意“mother”对应的代词应为“she”，而“practice bicycle”应改为“practice riding a bicycle”。建议先直接回答，再用一两句补充经历，并用连接词让表达更连贯。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was little. My mother bought me one when I was a teenager, and she helped me practise riding it every day.

建议: 你直接表达了观点，并给出了汽车价格和通勤选择作为理由，结构清楚。可以把“my country China”改成更自然的“In China”，把“prefer to choose cars”简化为“prefer to drive”，并注意比较结构保持一致，例如“drive rather than ride bikes”。也可以补充具体场景或用“relatively affordable”让关于汽车价格的说法更准确。

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in China. Cars are relatively affordable, so many families prefer to drive to work rather than ride bicycles, especially when they have a long commute.

× When I was a child, I didn't have a bicycle and until my teenager my mother bought me a bicycle and he helped me practice bicycle every day

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bicycle. My mother bought me one when I was a teenager, and she helped me practice riding it every day.

“until my teenager”结构不完整，不能用“my teenager”表达“我十几岁时”；应说“when I was a teenager”。原句还用多个 and 连在一起，句子结构不清晰。建议拆分句子，并使用完整的主语和谓语表达时间关系。

× When I was a child, I didn't have a bicycle and until my teenager my mother bought me a bicycle and he helped me practice bicycle every day

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bicycle. My mother bought me one when I was a teenager, and she helped me practice riding it every day.

“he”指代前面的“my mother”，但母亲是女性，因此应使用“she”。建议检查代词所指的人或事物，并确保代词在人称和性别上与其指代对象一致。

× When I was a child, I didn't have a bicycle and until my teenager my mother bought me a bicycle and he helped me practice bicycle every day

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bicycle. My mother bought me one when I was a teenager, and she helped me practice riding it every day.

“practice”后面表示练习某项活动时，通常接动词的-ing形式。这里应说“practice riding a bicycle”，而不是“practice bicycle”。建议记住“practice + 动词-ing”的搭配。