自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，但要用过去时描述童年经历：把“have”改为“had”，把“in my child”改为“when I was a child”。“small to feed my little body”表达不自然，可改为“small enough for me to ride”。“command this skills”应改为“mastered the skill”；删去重复词，并用一两个具体细节补充，例如车的颜色或学骑车的过程。

示例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. It was just the right size for me, and I learned to ride it in about a month.

建议: 先直接回答自行车是否流行，再说明与自行车相关的原因，例如通勤方便、费用低或环保。现在关于中国人重视自然和保护森林的内容与问题联系不够紧密，而且句子没有说完。注意避免“a country that who”这类结构，并使用具体例子；回答控制在几句内。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in cities. They’re convenient for short trips and are a more environmentally friendly option than driving. Many people also use shared bikes to get to nearby places.

× Yes, I have a bike in my child and it was really small to feed my little body and I and I command this this skills in just just in one month.

✓ Yes, I had a bike as a child, and it was really too small for my little body. I learned these skills in just one month.

这段话描述的是童年经历，属于过去的时间背景，因此应将现在时 have 改为过去式 had。command 是现在时，而且在这里不适合表达“学会技能”；可用过去式 learned。

× Yes, I have a bike in my child and it was really small to feed my little body and I and I command this this skills in just just in one month.

✓ Yes, I had a bike as a child, and it was really too small for my little body. I learned these skills in just one month.

表示“小时候”应使用 as a child，而不是 in my child。描述某物对某人来说太小，通常使用 too small for someone。

× Yes, I have a bike in my child and it was really small to feed my little body and I and I command this this skills in just just in one month.

✓ Yes, I had a bike as a child, and it was really too small for my little body. I learned these skills in just one month.

skills 是复数名词，因此前面的指示词应使用复数形式 these，不能使用单数形式 this。

× Of course, I think the bikes are popular in our country as you know that China is a country that who think the the nature is very important and we should protect the forest and.

✓ Of course, I think bikes are popular in our country. As you know, China is a country where people think nature is very important, and we should protect forests.

这里的 bikes 和 nature 都是泛指，不需要定冠词 the。因此应说 bikes are popular 和 nature is important。

× Of course, I think the bikes are popular in our country as you know that China is a country that who think the the nature is very important and we should protect the forest and.

✓ Of course, I think bikes are popular in our country. As you know, China is a country where people think nature is very important, and we should protect forests.

that 和 who 不能在这里连续充当同一个关系代词，原句中的 that who 造成代词重复。可以改为 where people，表达“人们认为”，并使从句结构完整。