自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意统一过去时：谈童年经历时用“rode”，不要用“ride”。“I will be just sink in”表达不清楚，建议换成准确、完整的说法，例如“I got tired after riding for a kilometer”。避免重复“I will be”，并减少口头填充语“you know”。

示例: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike around my neighborhood, and I sometimes rode quite fast. I usually got tired after about a kilometer, but I really enjoyed cycling.

建议: 回答方向明确，也给出了原因，但“personal ways”不是表示自行车道的自然说法，可用“bike lanes”或“cycle paths”；“electric motorcycle”建议改为复数“electric motorbikes”。注意使用连接词把原因串联起来，并避免重复“often just use”。可以补充骑车不方便或不安全这一具体结果。

示例: No, bikes aren’t especially popular where I live. Many people prefer electric motorbikes or cars because there aren’t many bike lanes. As a result, cycling can be inconvenient and sometimes feel unsafe.

× I often ride it and I ride it kind of fast.

✓ I often rode it, and I rode it kind of fast.

这句话描述的是小时候骑车的经历，时间发生在过去，因此应使用一般过去时。ride 的过去式是 rode。讲述过去的经历时，注意将相关动词统一调整为过去时。

× I think I will be I will be just sink in.

✓ I think I will just sink in.

情态动词 will 后面应直接接动词原形 sink，不能在动词前多加 be。表达“将会做某事”时，可使用 will + 动词原形；此外，应避免重复说“I will be”。

× We often use some electric motorcycle.

✓ We often use some electric motorcycles.

some 后接可数名词复数时，名词应使用复数形式。motorcycle 是可数名词，因此应改为 motorcycles。

× There are no personal ways just like roads for bike.

✓ There are no personal ways, just like roads for bikes.

这里的 bike 泛指自行车，作为可数名词不能单独使用单数形式；应改为复数 bikes。泛指一类事物时，可使用名词复数形式。