自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Yanıtınız çocukken bisikletiniz olduğunu anlatmaya çalışıyor, ancak ilk cümlede “hatırlamıyorum” demeniz sonraki bilgilerle çelişiyor. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayıp bisikletin rengini veya onunla ne yaptığınızı belirtin. Geçmiş zaman kullanın: “buy” yerine “bought”, “enjoy” yerine “enjoyed”. Son cümlede muhtemelen “riding” demek istediniz; bisiklet sürmenin size nasıl hissettirdiğini açıklayın. Tekrarlanan ifadeleri çıkarıp yanıtı 2–3 net cümlede tutun.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike when I was a child, and I was very happy when I got it. I loved riding it around my neighbourhood after school.

建议: Genel yanıtınız anlaşılır ve bisiklet kullanımına dair nedenler sunuyorsunuz; ancak ilk cümle dilbilgisi açısından karışık ve “nowadays” tekrarlanıyor. Önce bisikletlerin ne kadar popüler olduğunu net biçimde belirtin, ardından elektrikli bisikletlerden ve ulaşım maliyetlerinden söz edin. “Electrobikes” yerine “electric bikes”, “go long way” yerine “travel longer distances” kullanın. Metro ve taksilerle ilgili karşılaştırmayı daha doğal kurun ve mümkünse kullanımın nerede yaygın olduğuna dair somut bir örnek ekleyin.

示例: Bikes are becoming more popular in my country, especially electric bikes. They help people travel longer distances without paying for a taxi, and public transport can be quite expensive. However, cycling is still less common here than it is in some other countries.

× When I buy this bike, I felt very happy and I enjoy.

✓ When I bought this bike, I felt very happy and enjoyed it.

The speaker is describing a past experience, so use the past-tense forms bought and enjoyed. Enjoy is usually followed by an object, so it is clearer to say enjoyed it.

× I enjoyed that use this bike.

✓ I enjoyed using this bike.

After enjoy, use a gerund (a verb ending in -ing), not the base form use. The correct pattern is enjoy doing something.

× Yes nowadays it is especially electrobikes people use this bike to go long way without any taxis and our metros are little bit expensive today.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular nowadays, especially electric bikes. People use them to travel long distances instead of taking taxis, and our metro system is a little expensive.

The original contains a run-on sentence and an unclear opening phrase. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and state clearly what is popular. Use a clear subject and verb in each sentence.

× People use this bike to go long way without any taxis and our metros are little bit expensive today.

✓ People use bikes to go a long way without taking taxis, and our metro system is a little expensive today.

Use a before the singular countable expression a long way. The fixed phrase is a little bit; in this correction, a little expensive expresses the same idea without bit.

× People use this bike to go long way without any taxis.

✓ People use bikes to go a long way without taking taxis.

The answer refers to bikes in general, so the plural form bikes is more appropriate than the singular this bike. Use plural nouns when speaking generally about a category of things.