自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Відповідь доречна й містить особисту деталь, але потрібно використовувати минулий час: «Yes, I did» і «I loved it». Природніше сказати «a cute pink bike» та «I didn’t really enjoy cycling». Уточніть, що вам подобався сам велосипед, навіть якщо ви не дуже любили кататися на ньому.

示例: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a cute pink bike, and I loved it. I didn’t really enjoy cycling, though, so I mostly liked having the bike.

建议: Висловіть думку прямо, а потім поясніть її за допомогою зв’язки, наприклад «because» або «however». Розділяйте різні думки на окремі речення. Замість «it’s stay popular» скажіть «they remain popular» або «cycling is still popular». Для конкретики можна уточнити, що велосипеди менш популярні серед дітей у містах, але ними частіше користуються в селах.

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children in cities. Many of them prefer spending time on their phones. However, bikes are still popular in small villages, where people often use them to get around.

× Yes I have, my dad bought me a pink cute bike so I very loved it.

✓ Yes, I did. My dad bought me a cute pink bike, so I really loved it.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past-tense auxiliary did rather than have. Also, use really rather than very to modify the verb loved.

× my dad bought me a pink cute bike

✓ My dad bought me a cute pink bike.

When two adjectives describe a noun, opinion adjectives such as cute usually come before color adjectives such as pink.

× so I very loved it.

✓ so I really loved it.

Very does not normally modify a verb such as loved. Use really to intensify the verb.

× I don't very like to to bike

✓ I don't really like to bike.

Use really, not very, to modify the verb like. Also, the infinitive marker to should appear only once before the verb.

× but I always want to have it.

✓ but I always wanted to have it.

The answer describes the student's childhood, so the past-tense form wanted is needed to match the past context.

× I don't really think that bikes are very popular in my country most children have their phones so they don't want to have bikes.

✓ I don't really think that bikes are very popular in my country. Most children have their phones, so they don't want to have bikes.

The original joins two complete thoughts without punctuation or a conjunction. Separate them with a period, and use a comma before so when it connects the clauses.

× In a small village it's stay popular.

✓ In a small village, bikes stay popular.

It's means it is, and it cannot be followed directly by the base verb stay in this sentence. Use bikes stay, with the present-tense verb agreeing with the plural subject bikes.