自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly, then describe the memory in a more natural and organized way. Avoid repeating “I remember,” and use a linking phrase such as “Although I didn’t own one...” to connect your answer to the story. You could also clarify that you tried your friend’s bike.

示例: I didn’t have a bike of my own as a child. However, I tried my friend’s red bike when I visited her in high school. It was quite big for me, and she had to help me balance. I nearly fell a few times, so I never became very confident on it.

建议: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question. To develop it further, add a specific example and explain why bikes are useful, using a linking phrase such as “because” or “for example.” Consider replacing the broad phrase “various errands” with a more precise description.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in the Philippines, especially in busy cities. For example, many delivery riders use motorcycles to bring food to customers. They’re practical because they can move through traffic more easily than cars.