自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng có nhiều lỗi nghe nhầm và lặp từ: “pack” nên là “bike”, “pie” nên là “bike”, và “I usually I used to use” chỉ cần dùng một cấu trúc. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ, sau đó thêm một chi tiết cụ thể như tần suất hoặc mục đích sử dụng. Câu trả lời nên tự nhiên và ngắn gọn trong 2–3 câu.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, especially at weekends.

建议: Câu trả lời chưa trả lời rõ câu hỏi về mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp và có nhiều từ bị lặp hoặc không rõ nghĩa như “yesterday”, “you bye” và “go to work”. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp như “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Sau đó, dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “for example” để nêu các mục đích cụ thể, chẳng hạn đi học, đi làm hoặc đi siêu thị. Cần tránh liệt kê rời rạc và kiểm soát độ trôi chảy.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in small towns. Many people ride them to school, work, or nearby shops because they are affordable and convenient.

× I have a pack.

✓ I had a bike.

Because the speaker is talking about a past period, when they were a child, the past-tense form had is needed instead of the present-tense form have. The word bike is also used to clarify the intended meaning.

× When I was a child I usually I used to use my pie, my bike to travel around the neighborhood.

✓ When I was a child, I usually used my bike to travel around the neighborhood.

The original sentence repeats the subject I and contains an unnecessary self-correction. Use one clear subject followed by one main verb. The structure usually used is natural for describing a regular past action. Remember to use a comma after the introductory clause When I was a child.

× Apologize uh, yesterday they were you, you bye, bye. You go to work, go to work, I'll go to school and usually my friends, I see my friends, you bye bye.

✓ Yes, they are popular. People use bikes to go to work and school, and I usually see my friends riding bikes.

The question asks about the present popularity of bikes, so use the present-tense form are, not the past-tense form were. Use use and see for general habits. The original answer also contains incomplete and repeated clauses, so each idea should be expressed in a complete sentence.

× To go to supermarket, uh, shopping center or entertainment facilities.

✓ People use bikes to go to the supermarket, shopping centers, or entertainment facilities.

Use the preposition to before destinations, as in go to the supermarket. The original phrase is also incomplete because it has no subject and finite verb. Adding People use bikes makes the sentence complete.

× To go to supermarket, uh, shopping center or entertainment facilities.

✓ People use bikes to go to the supermarket, shopping centers, or entertainment facilities.

Supermarket is a singular countable noun, so it needs a determiner. The definite article the is appropriate when referring to a supermarket as a destination. Plural nouns such as shopping centers and entertainment facilities do not need the in this general statement.