自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接、清晰，语法基本准确，也使用了“until”补充时间信息。可以去掉开头的“Umm”，让表达更自信、更流畅；另外，可以再补充一个简短原因或结果，使答案更丰富，但不要超过两到三句话。

示例: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was safer for me to use public transport, so I didn’t get one until I went to college.

建议: 回答有相关背景和原因，但没有直接回答现在自行车是否流行，而且句子没有说完，影响完整性和流畅度。“were very much popular”不自然，建议改为“were very popular”或“were widely used”。此外，“China was poor”表达过于笼统，可以改为“cars were less affordable”或“public transport was less developed”，语气更准确。建议使用“however”对过去和现在进行对比，并补充完整结论。

示例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in China, especially in large cities. When I was a child, they were widely used because cars were less affordable and public transport was not as developed as it is today. Nowadays, many people also use shared bikes for short journeys.

× Bikes were very much popular when I was a child because China was poor and people couldn't afford cars and we didn't have much public transport.

✓ Bikes were very popular when I was a child because China was poor, people couldn't afford cars, and we didn't have much public transport.

“Popular”是形容词，通常用“very”修饰，不能使用“very much popular”这一搭配。“Very much”主要用于修饰动词或某些特定的形容词短语。这里应改为“very popular”。另外，列举多个原因时，在最后一个并列成分前加“and”，并用逗号分隔，可以使句子结构更清晰。