自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời trực tiếp và có lý do rõ ràng, nhưng có một số lỗi dùng từ và ngữ pháp. “Bites” cần sửa thành “bikes”, và cấu trúc “I used to have, I think it was two or three bikes” chưa tự nhiên; nên nói “I think I had two or three bikes.” Cụm “cycling around with my friends and riding a bike” bị lặp ý, vì vậy chỉ cần dùng một cách diễn đạt. Em có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn nơi em thường đạp xe hoặc cảm xúc của em, để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

示例: Yes, definitely. I think I had two or three bikes when I was a child because cycling was one of my favorite hobbies. I often rode around my neighborhood with my friends after school, and I really enjoyed the freedom it gave me.

建议: Em đã trả lời đúng chủ đề và đưa ra quan sát cá nhân, nhưng câu trả lời còn nhiều lỗi khiến ý chưa hoàn chỉnh. “Buys” cần sửa thành “bikes”; “plenty of children here cycling” cần sửa thành “many children here cycle”; “really much” không tự nhiên và có thể thay bằng “quite often”. Ngoài ra, “it include it includes me” bị lặp và câu cuối “I really think that cycling” chưa hoàn thành. Hãy dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: trả lời quan điểm trước, sau đó nêu bằng chứng từ khu phố và kết luận ngắn gọn.

示例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. In my neighborhood, I often see many young people cycling with their friends in the afternoon. I used to do the same, so I think cycling is still a common leisure activity.

× I really think that bikes are really popular in my country because from what I witnessed in my neighborhood, plenty of children here cycling around with their friends really much.

✓ I really think that bikes are really popular in my country because, from what I have witnessed in my neighborhood, plenty of children here are cycling around with their friends.

The verb phrase are cycling is needed because cycling is a present continuous action. The auxiliary verb are must be used before the present participle cycling.

× I really think that bikes are really popular in my country because from what I witnessed in my neighborhood, plenty of children here cycling around with their friends really much.

✓ I really think that bikes are really popular in my country because, from what I witnessed in my neighborhood, plenty of children here are cycling around with their friends a lot.

Really much is not natural when describing how frequently people do an action. Use a lot or often instead. A lot usually comes at the end of the clause.

× Of course it include it includes me and from that experience, I really think that cycling.

✓ Of course, it includes me, and from that experience, I really think that cycling is popular.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb must be includes, not include. The repeated phrase it include it includes should also be reduced to one correct verb phrase.

× Of course it include it includes me and from that experience, I really think that cycling.

✓ Of course, it includes me, and from that experience, I really think that cycling is popular.

The final clause is incomplete because cycling is only a subject and there is no main verb. Add is popular to complete the sentence and express the intended meaning.