自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答的核心意思是“小时候没有自行车”，但表达中有很多重复、停顿和不完整句子，例如“my so my parents did”“buy a buy”。首先直接回答，然后用清晰的原因和具体经历展开。可以说父母没有买自行车，因为你小时候主要在游泳池训练；后来上高中时学校离家很远，这说明自行车可能会很有用。注意使用过去时，如“didn’t buy”和“went to high school”，并将答案控制在2—3个完整句子内。

示例: No, I didn’t. I spent most of my childhood training at a swimming pool, so my parents never bought me a bike. However, when I went to high school, I wished I had one because my school was quite far from home.

建议: 你的观点基本明确，但“taking a bite”“bye bye”是明显的词汇或发音问题，应该使用“riding a bike”和“renting/using a bike”。答案中还存在重复，且“a certain bike”意思不清。建议先直接说明自行车不如地铁受欢迎，再解释共享单车在街上很常见，并使用“however”连接对比。可以补充一个具体原因，例如地铁更快、更方便，尤其适合长距离出行。

示例: No, I wouldn’t say bikes are very popular in my country, especially for long-distance travel. However, shared bikes are common on city streets, and people can unlock them by scanning a QR code. The subway is still more popular because it is faster and more convenient.

× When I was trying I'd be in the pool family so my so my parents did. Didn't buy a buy for me.

✓ When I was a child, I would swim in the pool with my family, so my parents didn't buy a bike for me.

这里是在回忆童年时期的经历，因此应使用过去时。表达“和家人在游泳池里”时，需要使用介词“with”，而不是直接说“pool family”。“buy a bike”是完整、正确的动词短语；原句中的“a buy”重复且结构错误。“so”连接原因和结果时，后面的句子应有完整的主语和谓语。

× But I remember this when I go to the high school it is a far away from my home to.

✓ But I remember that when I went to high school, it was far away from my home, too.

“I went”和“it was”描述过去的经历，所以要使用过去时，不能使用现在时“go”和“is”。“go to high school”通常表示上高中，不需要使用定冠词“the”。“far away”是副词短语，前面不能加不定冠词“a”。原句把两个完整的意思直接连接在一起，缺少连接词和标点；使用“that”和“when”后，句子结构更清楚。

× No, people are taking a bite, taking a bite and not popular in our countries, but we have a certain bite on the street.

✓ No, people don't often ride bikes, and bikes aren't popular in our country, but we do have some shared bikes on the streets.

这个问题询问现在的情况，所以应使用一般现在时“don't often ride”和“aren't”，而不是不符合语境的进行时“are taking”。“bike”表示复数概念时应使用“bikes”，并且复数主语“bikes”要搭配“aren't”。“in our country”和“on the streets”中的介词搭配更准确。“and”用于连接两个完整分句，可以避免原句中多个短语杂乱堆叠的问题。

× People can scan the QR code to bye bye, but the subway is the popular.

✓ People can scan a QR code to rent a shared bike, but the subway is the most popular form of transportation.

第一次提到二维码时，通常使用不定冠词“a”，而不是特指的“the”。“the popular”结构不完整；当表达“最受欢迎的”时，应使用最高级“the most popular”，后面最好补充名词短语“form of transportation”。原句中的“bye bye”不是正确的英语动词表达；根据上下文，这里的意思应是“rent a shared bike”。