自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và bị lặp lại cụm “when I was a child” cũng như “because”. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng “No” hoặc “I didn’t”, sau đó đưa ra một lý do rõ ràng. Cần sửa lỗi phát âm/từ vựng “bite” và “buy” thành “bike”, đồng thời sửa “my parents was not buying” thành “my parents didn’t buy”. Hãy kết thúc câu đầy đủ thay vì bỏ dở.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. They usually took me to school by motorbike instead.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng chủ đề nhưng cần dùng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn. “Important portion” không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này; nên dùng “an important means of transportation”. Cụm “use transfer to goods” sai ngữ pháp và ý nghĩa chưa rõ; hãy nói “transport goods” hoặc “transport people and goods”. Bạn nên nêu rõ loại xe đang nói đến (xe đạp hay xe máy), dùng từ nối như “because”, và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể để phát triển câu trả lời.

示例: Yes, bikes, especially motorbikes, are extremely popular in my country. They are relatively cheap to buy and run, and they are convenient for transporting people and goods through busy streets.

× I didn't have a bite when I was a child because when I was a child, my parents was not buying a buy for me because

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were not buying one for me.

The subject parents is plural, so it must be followed by were, not was. Also, one can replace the repeated noun bike and make the sentence less repetitive.

× I didn't have a bite when I was a child because when I was a child, my parents was not buying a buy for me because

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn't buy one for me.

The question asks about a completed situation in the past. Therefore, the simple past didn't buy is more suitable than the past continuous was not buying.

× I didn't have a bite when I was a child because when I was a child, my parents was not buying a buy for me because

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn't buy one for me.

The sentence repeats when I was a child, ends with an unnecessary because, and contains an incomplete clause. Use one clear because clause to explain the reason.

× I think bikes are popular and important portion in my country because bike or motorbike is very cheap to use transfer to goods.

✓ I think bikes are popular and an important means of transportation in my country because bikes and motorbikes are very cheap for transporting goods.

The singular countable phrase means of transportation needs the article an. The phrase important portion is not the correct noun phrase for this meaning; an important means of transportation is the appropriate expression.

× I think bikes are popular and important portion in my country because bike or motorbike is very cheap to use transfer to goods.

✓ I think bikes are popular and an important means of transportation in my country because bikes and motorbikes are very cheap for transporting goods.

After the preposition for, use the gerund transporting. The correct phrase is for transporting goods, not to use transfer to goods.

× I think bikes are popular and important portion in my country because bike or motorbike is very cheap to use transfer to goods.

✓ I think bikes are popular and an important means of transportation in my country because bikes and motorbikes are very cheap for transporting goods.

Use for before the -ing form to express purpose: cheap for transporting goods. The original combination to use transfer to goods is not grammatically correct.