自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答基本直接，但时态和表达不准确。谈论童年经历时应使用过去时，例如“had”和“couldn't”。“find the balance”应改为“keep my balance”，“in their sport”不符合语境，可以删除或改为“when riding it”。建议减少填充词，并用“but”和“because”清楚连接观点和原因；同时补充一个具体细节，例如摔倒或练习的经历。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I couldn’t ride it very smoothly at first. I often lost my balance and fell off, so I was a little nervous about riding it. However, I gradually improved after practising with my parents.

建议: 回答表达了明确观点，但“back”应为“bikes”，“almost people”应改为“most people”，“most like”应改为“prefer”，而且不应把“Because”单独作为句子开头。内容略显笼统，建议先直接回答，再说明原因，并加入更准确的比较或例子，例如城市交通、共享单车或不同年龄群体的使用情况。

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular as a form of exercise in my country. Most people prefer sports such as table tennis or basketball, while many commuters use public transport instead. However, shared bikes are still common in large cities because they are convenient for short trips.

× Yes, I have a bike, but I uh, can't use it very, umm, smoothly because I uh, I often didn't find the balance uh, in their sport.

✓ Yes, I had a bike, but I couldn’t use it very smoothly because I often couldn’t find my balance in this sport.

题目询问的是童年时期的情况，因此应使用过去时：have 改为 had。由于描述的是过去的能力，can’t 应改为 couldn’t。their 没有明确的复数先行词，而且这里表达的是“保持我的平衡”，所以应使用物主代词 my。口语中的 uh 和 umm 应在正式回答中删除。

× I think back is not popular in my country. Because I think almost people in China most like to play table tennis or other ball sports.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country because most people in China like to play table tennis or other ball sports.

bike 应使用复数 bikes，因为问题谈论的是自行车这一类事物；相应地，谓语也应使用 are。almost people 的数量表达不正确，应改为 most people，表示“大多数人”。Because 引导的是原因从句，不能单独构成一个完整句子，因此应将它与前面的主句连接起来。