自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời có ý chính và có thông tin bổ trợ về màu sắc, mục đích sử dụng, nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ đơn vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu: “I had” và “I liked”. Ngoài ra, cần sửa “a big a pink bike” thành “a big pink bike”, thay “every sentence” bằng các câu ngắn hơn, đồng thời dùng từ nối như “I used it to…” để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I had a big pink bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school every day, so it was very useful. I really liked it because it was comfortable and easy to ride.

建议: Câu trả lời trả lời trực tiếp và đưa ra các lý do phù hợp như giá rẻ, tiện lợi và dễ đi. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa lỗi hòa hợp chủ ngữ–động từ: “every student has a bike”, đồng thời tránh nối quá nhiều ý bằng “and”. Hãy nhóm các lý do bằng từ nối như “because” và “Moreover”, đồng thời dùng cách diễn đạt chính xác hơn như “bicycles are affordable” thay cho việc lặp lại “cheap” và “easy”.

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among students. They are affordable, convenient, and easy to ride, so many students use them to travel to school. Moreover, bicycles are a practical choice because they do not require fuel.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child a big a pink bike and I used it to go to school and I really like the bike I really like this bike and it's very useful.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child—a big pink bike. I used it to go to school, and I really liked the bike. It was very useful.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past tense had instead of have, liked instead of like, and was instead of is. Keep the verb tense consistent when describing childhood experiences.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child a big a pink bike and I used it to go to school and I really like the bike I really like this bike and it's very useful.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child—a big pink bike. I used it to go to school, and I really liked the bike. It was very useful.

The phrase a big a pink bike contains two indefinite articles. Only one article is needed before the complete noun phrase: a big pink bike.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child a big a pink bike and I used it to go to school and I really like the bike I really like this bike and it's very useful.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child—a big pink bike. I used it to go to school, and I really liked the bike. It was very useful.

The original answer is a run-on sentence containing several complete ideas without clear sentence boundaries. Separate the ideas into shorter sentences and use conjunctions or punctuation appropriately.

× Yes, in my country, bikes are very popular because it's convenient and cheap and easy to ride and every student have a bike.

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are very popular because they are convenient, cheap, and easy to ride, and every student has a bike.

The pronoun it refers to a singular noun, but bikes is plural. Use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are. Make sure pronouns agree in number with the nouns they replace.

× Yes, in my country, bikes are very popular because it's convenient and cheap and easy to ride and every student have a bike.

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are very popular because they are convenient, cheap, and easy to ride, and every student has a bike.

Every student is grammatically singular, so the verb must have the third-person singular form has, not have. Remember to add s or use the correct irregular form with singular subjects in the present tense.