自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你没有直接回答问题，而是重复了考官的问题，因此缺少明确的观点和具体细节。另外，应该说“when you were a child”，不能省略冠词“a”。建议先用“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”直接回答，然后补充一至两句原因、经历或具体例子。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建议: 你重复了考官的问题，没有表达自己的观点，因此没有完成回答。建议先明确说明自行车是否流行，再使用“because”或“for example”等连接词补充原因和具体场景。回答控制在两到三句即可。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who exercise regularly. They are convenient, inexpensive, and a good way to avoid traffic jams.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用冠词。这里表示“作为一个孩子”，应使用不定冠词“a”，所以应改为“when you were a child”。