自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答与问题相关，但有明显语法和表达问题。应使用连接词将句子分开，例如用“which”或“and”；“it was my mother bought for me”应改为“my mother bought it for me”；“I worry”明显不合适，可能想表达“I really liked it”。另外，结尾可以补充骑车的具体地点或用途，使答案更完整、自然。

示例: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a bike when I was a child, and I really liked it. I often rode it around my neighborhood, especially on weekends.

建议: 回答观点明确，但存在词语误用、重复和语法错误。“sheltered bikes”不符合语境，可以改为“many bike lanes”或“a well-developed cycling system”；“take takes bikes”应改为“ride bikes”；“go to school or company”应改为“go to school or work”。建议使用“because”连接原因，并加入具体人群或场景作为支持细节。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many cities have dedicated bike lanes. Students often ride bikes to school, while adults use them to commute to work. They are convenient and also environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child it was my mother bought for me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was bought for me by my mother.

这里有两个完整句子，却没有用句号或连接词分开，造成句子结构错误。应在“child”后加句号，将内容分成两个句子。

× it was my mother bought for me

✓ It was bought for me by my mother.

“自行车是被妈妈买给我的”，主语“it”是动作的承受者，所以要使用被动语态：be + 过去分词。此处应使用“was bought”，而不是“was my mother bought”。

× I really like it so I often cycle.

✓ I really liked it, so I often cycled.

问题描述的是童年时期的经历，属于过去时间，因此“like”和“cycle”都应使用一般过去时，分别改为“liked”和“cycled”。两个分句之间用逗号和“so”连接。

× Many people take takes bikes, go to school or company.

✓ Many people take bikes to go to school or work.

“take takes”中动词重复，导致句子结构错误。应保留“take”，并使用“take bikes to go...”表示“骑自行车去上学或上班”。