自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Use the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: say “I had,” not “I do have.” You could also add one specific detail, such as how often you used the bike or where you rode it, to make the answer more developed and natural.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and it was one of my favorite ways to spend time outdoors.

建议: Your answer gives a clear opinion and a relevant reason, but improve the grammar and natural phrasing. Say “Bikes are popular” with a comma after “Yes,” use “ride bikes” instead of “ride on a bike” when speaking generally, and say “rather than drive cars” instead of “rather than on cars.” Use a linking word such as “because” or “since” to connect the reason smoothly.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in my town. Since it is a small town, people often ride bikes because they are more convenient than driving cars, particularly for short journeys.

× Yes I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so the answer should use the past tense. Had is the past-tense form of have. Do have is present tense and does not match the time expression when I was a child.

× It is a small town so it is easier for us to ride on a bike rather than on cars.

✓ It is a small town, so it is easier for us to ride a bike rather than drive a car.

In English, we normally say ride a bike, not ride on a bike. Also, drive a car is the natural expression for traveling by car. Using ride a bike rather than drive a car creates a clear and parallel comparison.