自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is direct and relevant, and the airport detail makes it more interesting. However, “I had a bike when I was a child” is repetitive after “Yes, I did,” and “liked to see airplanes” sounds less natural than “liked watching airplanes.” Use a linking word such as “because” to show the connection between having a bike and going to the airport. Keep the answer concise and make the reason more specific.

示例: Yes, I did. I loved riding my bike to the airport because I enjoyed watching airplanes take off and land. It was one of my favorite activities when I was a child.

建议: You give a clear opinion, but the answer does not fully explain whether bikes are popular overall. The phrase “among Look young mothers” appears to be a hesitation or speaking error, and “a frequent scene” and “go shopping by bicycles” are unnatural in this context. Say “among young mothers with small children” and use “ride their bikes when they go shopping.” Add a specific reason, such as convenience, exercise, or environmental concerns, and connect the ideas with “for example” or “because.”

示例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular, although it depends on the generation and the area where people live. For example, many young mothers with small children ride their bikes when they go shopping because it is convenient and inexpensive. However, older people and those living in large cities often prefer public transportation.

× So I often went to the airport by bicycle.

✓ So I often went to the airport by bicycle.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The phrase by bicycle is the standard way to describe traveling by bike, so no correction is needed.

× But among Look young mothers who have a little child, it's a frequent scene that mothers go shopping by bicycles.

✓ But among young mothers who have a little child, it's a frequent scene that mothers go shopping by bicycle.

When by describes a means of transportation, the vehicle is usually singular and used without an article: by bicycle, by car, and by bus. Bicycles would be appropriate only when referring to specific multiple bicycles. Look appears to be an accidental word or transcription error, so it has been removed.