自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly and use the past simple because the question refers to your childhood. Avoid repeating “no,” and add a brief reason or detail to make the answer more complete. For example, explain whether your parents did not buy you one or whether you preferred another activity.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on the busy roads near our home, so I usually played football with my friends instead.

建议: State your opinion clearly in the first sentence, then support it with a specific explanation or example. Avoid structures such as “there are bikes are popular” and use “bikes are popular.” Also, use accurate plural forms and natural expressions such as “young people” and “adults over 18.” Make the meaning clearer because bicycles are commonly associated with children, while motorbikes may be more popular among adults.

示例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. However, motorbikes are more common among adults over 18 because they are a convenient way to commute to work. In large cities, many people use them to avoid traffic jams.

× No, no, I don't have a bike when I was a kid.

✓ No, no, I didn't have a bike when I was a kid.

The phrase when I was a kid refers to a finished period in the past, so the past-tense form didn't have is required instead of the present-tense form don't have.

× There are bikes are popular in our country but it is not for the kids or the younger one.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country, but they are not popular among children or younger people.

There are cannot be followed directly by the clause bikes are popular. Use the subject Bikes at the beginning of the sentence. Also, bikes is plural, so the pronoun must be they rather than it.

× There are bikes are popular in our country but it is not for the kids or the younger one.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country, but they are not popular among children or younger people.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Therefore, use they. When referring to people in general, younger people is also more appropriate than the singular expression the younger one.

× Basically it is for the adult people that is above 18 years.

✓ Basically, they are for adults who are over 18.

The pronoun they refers to bikes, so the singular pronoun it is incorrect. The relative pronoun who is used for people, and it correctly refers to adults.

× Basically it is for the adult people that is above 18 years.

✓ Basically, they are for adults who are over 18.

The subject adults is plural, so the verb must be are, not is. The phrase over 18 is the natural way to express a person's age in this context.