自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer responds directly and includes a specific detail about your age. However, “was very enjoy” is grammatically incorrect, and “lining up by” does not express your intended meaning. Use the gerund form “enjoyed riding” after the past-tense verb “enjoyed.” You could also add a brief detail about where or how often you rode the bike.

示例: Absolutely. My mom bought me a bike when I was six years old, and I really enjoyed riding it back then. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建议: You give a clear opinion and a reason, but “later than riding bikes” is incorrect in this context. Use “rather than riding bikes” to show a preference or choice. To make the answer more effective, explain why public transport is preferred, such as because it is more convenient or suitable for long distances.

示例: I would say they are not very popular because people in my country tend to use public transport rather than ride bikes. Public transport is more convenient, especially for commuting long distances and avoiding heavy traffic.

× Absolutely. My mom bought me a bike when I was six years old and I was very enjoy lining up by back then.

✓ Absolutely. My mom bought me a bike when I was six years old, and I really enjoyed riding it back then.

The sentence refers to a past experience, so use the past-tense verb enjoyed instead of was enjoy. The verb enjoy is followed by a gerund or -ing form, such as riding. The phrase riding it is also the natural expression for using a bike. To improve, use enjoyed + verb-ing when describing an activity you liked in the past.

× I would say no because in my country people tend to take public transport later than riding bikes.

✓ I would say no because in my country people tend to take public transport rather than ride bikes.

Later than expresses a difference in time, but the intended meaning is a preference or choice between two activities. Use rather than to contrast taking public transport with riding bikes. The verbs after rather than should be parallel: take public transport and ride bikes.