自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng có nhiều lỗi khiến người nghe khó hiểu: “Just occur in a childhood” nên đổi thành “When I was a child”; “brought me a bite” phải là “bought me a bike”; “I were about age” nên sửa thành “when I was about [age]”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn sử dụng xe đạp. Có thể dùng từ nối như “I used to” hoặc “Besides” để liên kết ý và nhớ dùng tối đa khoảng 2–3 câu cho câu hỏi Part 1 này.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was about eight, and I used to ride it to school and play with my friends.

建议: Câu trả lời chưa trả lời rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp/từ vựng. Hãy bắt đầu bằng ý kiến trực tiếp như “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Sau đó giải thích lý do bằng cấu trúc đúng: “People use them to stay healthy” hoặc “Many people ride bikes in the morning.” Không nên dùng “my people”, “have live healthy” và “by this morning”; thay vào đó, hãy dùng “people”, “live a healthy lifestyle” và “ride their bikes in the morning”. Bạn cũng nên đưa thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn người cao tuổi hoặc học sinh thường đạp xe ở công viên.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and older people. Many people ride them in the morning because cycling helps them stay healthy and avoid traffic.

× occur in a childhood

✓ when I was a child

Use when I was a child to describe a period in your life. The preposition in is not used before a childhood in this expression. You can begin the answer with Actually, when I was a child, ...

× I were about age

✓ I was about [age]

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past tense was. With the subject I, the correct form is was, not were. Include a specific age after about, such as I was about ten years old.

× I were about age

✓ I was about [age]

The verb be must agree with the subject I. In the past tense, I takes was, whereas were is used with you, we, and they.

× Just occur in a childhood my parents brought me a bite when I were about age I used to ride to school and play with friends

✓ Actually, when I was a child, my parents bought me a bike. I was about [age], and I used to ride it to school and play with my friends.

The original response contains several clauses joined without proper punctuation or connectors. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and use a connector such as and where necessary. This makes the answer clearer and easier to follow.

× my people in the country have live healthy

✓ people in my country live healthily

For a general fact about present-day life, use the simple present: people live. Do not use have before the base verb live in this sentence. Also, live should be modified by the adverb healthily.

× live healthy

✓ live healthily

The verb live should be followed by an adverb when describing how people live. Therefore, use healthily rather than the adjective healthy. A simpler natural alternative is live a healthy lifestyle.

× we always by this morning

✓ we always ride bikes in the morning

The original phrase does not contain a main verb. Add ride to complete the sentence. Use in the morning, not by this morning, when describing a regular daily activity.

× by this morning

✓ in the morning

Use in the morning for a usual time of day. By this morning means no later than this morning and is normally used for a deadline, not for a regular habit.