自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答基本直接，也提供了原因，但时态错误较多：应将“do have”改为“had”，“go”改为“went”，“learn”改为“learned”。“because I I”存在重复和不流畅的问题；“at a very young age”重复出现，可以删减一次。此外，“go to the school”在这里更自然的表达是“go to school”。建议使用过去时，并按照“直接回答+原因+具体细节”的结构组织答案。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to go to school because I started travelling there on my own at a young age. I learned to ride it when I was about six.

建议: 回答内容切题，包含共享单车、便利、健康和环保等具体理由，结构也比较清晰。不过，“Yes, in my opinion, I think”重复表达观点，保留一个即可；“some shared bike”应改为“some shared bikes”或“a shared-bike system”；“it's it's”是明显重复。可以使用“Moreover”或“Besides”连接补充理由，并加入一个更具体的使用场景，使答案更自然有效。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes for short journeys because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. For example, commuters often cycle from a subway station to their offices.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child because I I go to the school by myself since a very young age.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because I went to school by myself from a very young age.

“when I was a child”表示过去时间，因此“do have”和“go”应改为过去式“had”和“went”。“from a very young age”表示“从很小的时候起”，比“since a very young age”更适合这里的表达。“go to school”表示去上学这一常规活动时，school前通常不使用定冠词“the”。“I I”属于口语重复，不影响主要语法结构，正式表达时应删除重复。

× So I learn to ride a bike at a very young age.

✓ So I learned to ride a bike at a very young age.

整段回答是在描述童年经历，使用的是过去时。因此，动词“learn”应改为过去式“learned”。注意规则动词过去式通常在词尾加“-ed”。

× So I absolutely have my own bike as a child.

✓ So I definitely had my own bike as a child.

“as a child”明确表示过去的童年时期，所以“have”应改为过去式“had”。“definitely”在这里比“absolutely”更自然，但这属于表达优化，不是必须的语法修改。

× We do have some shared bike around the city, so you can just hire a bike when you're going out.

✓ We do have some shared bikes around the city, so you can just hire a bike when you're going out.

“some”后面通常接可数名词复数形式。因为这里指的是多辆共享单车，所以“bike”应改为复数“bikes”。