自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng chủ đề và đưa ra một số chi tiết cụ thể như màu sắc, bánh phụ và địa điểm đạp xe. Tuy nhiên, “When it was a trait” không tự nhiên và có thể bạn muốn nói “When I was a child”. Cụm “training wells” cần sửa thành “training wheels”, còn “I always spend” nên dùng thì quá khứ “I always spent” vì đang nói về thời thơ ấu. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó thêm lý do hoặc cảm xúc để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

示例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had a pink bicycle with small training wheels. I often rode it around the park with my friends, and I really enjoyed learning how to balance on it.

建议: Bạn đã nêu được quan điểm rằng xe đạp phổ biến, nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi về đại từ và diễn đạt. “Bikes” là danh từ số nhiều nên dùng “They are”, không phải “It is”. Cụm “one of the most appealing children to use” không đúng nghĩa; nên nói “one of the most popular forms of transport for children”. Bạn nên đưa thêm một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể, chẳng hạn xe đạp rẻ, tiện lợi, tốt cho sức khỏe hoặc thường được trẻ em sử dụng để đi học và vui chơi. Hãy dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “also” để liên kết ý.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. They are affordable, easy to use, and a convenient way to travel short distances. Many children also ride their bikes to school or around their neighborhoods for exercise and fun.

× When it was a trait I had a pink bicycle with a small training wells.

✓ When I was a child, I had a pink bicycle with small training wheels.

The clause When it was a trait is not correctly structured. Use When I was a child because the speaker is describing their own childhood. Also, training wheels is a plural noun, so it does not take the article a.

× When it was a trait I had a pink bicycle with a small training wells.

✓ When I was a child, I had a pink bicycle with small training wheels.

Training wheels is plural, so the singular article a must be removed. The correct phrase is small training wheels.

× I always spend time cycling the bike around the park with friends.

✓ I always spent time cycling around the park with my friends.

The question asks about a past period in childhood, so the past tense spent is required instead of the present-tense verb spend.

× It is very popular in my country because it is one of the most appealing children to use.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country because they are among the most appealing options for children to use.

The noun bikes is plural, so the pronoun it cannot refer to it. Use they to refer to bikes.

× It is very popular in my country because it is one of the most appealing children to use.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country because they are among the most appealing options for children to use.

The plural subject bikes requires the plural verb are, not the singular verb is. The pronoun they also requires are.

× It is very popular in my country because it is one of the most appealing children to use.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country because they are among the most appealing options for children to use.

The phrase children to use is incomplete because children need to be introduced with the preposition for. The correct structure is options for children to use.