自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly using the past tense. The phrase “on all the time” is incorrect and unclear; say “I had a bike” or “I always had a bike.” Add one specific detail, such as where you rode it or who gave it to you.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I especially enjoyed cycling in the park with my friends.

建议: Use a clear topic sentence and keep the answer focused on bike popularity in your country. Avoid unclear or unrelated phrases such as “watching the long childhood” and “He looks like he’s a bank.” Also, use correct subject-verb agreement: “bikes are popular” and “people ride.” Support your opinion with one specific reason or example, using a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and young adults. Many people ride them in parks or use them for short trips because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. For example, it is common to see families cycling together on weekends.

× Yes, I have a bike on all the time.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past period, when you were a child, so use the past-tense verb had instead of the present-tense verb have. The phrase on all the time is not appropriate here; use when I was a child to answer the question clearly.

× Yes, it's very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country.

The word bikes in the examiner's question is plural, so use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are instead of it and is.

× Yes, it's very popular in my country and watching the long childhood for for the children so much.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and children enjoy riding them very much during childhood.

The original sentence does not form a clear grammatical structure because watching is not connected to a suitable subject or verb, and for is unnecessarily repeated. Use children enjoy riding them to express the idea clearly. The phrase during childhood is the natural way to refer to this period of life.

× He just ride a bike around the park.

✓ He just rides a bike around the park.

The subject he is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb ride must take the -s ending: rides.