自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense: “Yes, I did.” Then add a specific detail with a linking word such as “In fact” or “However.” Correct “I have” to “I had,” and avoid joining two independent clauses with only a comma. Although your memory is relevant, explain it more clearly in no more than two or three sentences.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood. In fact, I once bumped into a tree because I was not paying attention.

建议: Give a clear opinion instead of an uncertain one-word answer. Support your view with specific reasons, such as the cost of bicycles, traffic conditions, health benefits, or the popularity of cycling in cities. Use a linking word like “because” or “although” to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys, although heavy traffic can make cycling dangerous in some cities.

× Yes I have, I also remember I bumped into a tree when I was little.

✓ Yes, I did. I also remember that I bumped into a tree when I was little.

The question uses the simple past auxiliary did: Did you have a bike...? Therefore, the short answer should be Yes, I did, not Yes, I have. The comma after Yes is also needed. The phrase I bumped into a tree is correctly in the past tense because it describes an event that happened when the student was little.