自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then add one clear reason or future plan. Correct “looking forward to have” to “looking forward to having,” and use “learn how to ride a bike,” not “learn how to write on the bike.” Avoid fillers and repeated phrases such as “umm,” “uh,” and “how to.”

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family thought it was unsafe. However, I’m looking forward to buying one next month so that I can learn how to ride and get some exercise.

建议: Give a clear comparison and support it with a specific reason. Use complete sentences, such as “Cars are much more popular,” and replace unclear phrases like “following the distance” and “than public” with precise expressions such as “for commuting” and “than public transport.” Avoid repetition and incorrect forms such as “the cars is.”

示例: No, bikes aren’t particularly popular in my country. Cars are much more common because people often use them to commute to work and travel long distances. In addition, public transport is usually more convenient for people who do not want to cycle.

× I'm looking forward to have one, umm, maybe next month, uh, and start to learn.

✓ I'm looking forward to having one, um, maybe next month, and starting to learn.

The expression look forward to is followed by a gerund, or verb + -ing form, because to is a preposition here. Therefore, have becomes having. For parallel structure, start should also become starting.

× I want to learn on how to, umm, how to write on the bike.

✓ I want to learn how to ride a bike.

The verb learn is followed directly by how to, not on how to. Also, ride is the correct verb for using a bike; write has a different meaning. To improve, use the pattern learn how to + base verb.

× Cars much more popular because they used a lot for getting the people there in their works and communicating, following the distance.

✓ Cars are much more popular because they are used frequently to take people to work and to cover long distances.

The first clause needs the verb are: Cars are much more popular. The original sentence also needs a complete verb phrase after because. The corrected version uses are used to express the passive meaning and uses natural expressions such as take people to work and cover long distances.

× Cars much more popular because they used a lot for getting the people there in their works and communicating, following the distance.

✓ Cars are much more popular because they are used frequently to take people to work and to cover long distances.

The intended meaning is that people use cars, so the passive structure they are used is appropriate. In the passive voice, use be + past participle: are used. Avoid the incomplete form they used when you mean that cars receive the action.

× They used a lot for getting the people there in their works and communicating, following the distance.

✓ They are used frequently to take people to work and to cover long distances.

The prepositions and expressions in the original sentence are unnatural. Use take people to work, not get the people there in their works. Use cover long distances, not follow the distance.

× I think that the cars is much much much popular than public.

✓ I think that cars are much more popular than public transportation.

Cars is plural, so it must be followed by the plural verb are, not is. Remember to match plural subjects with plural verbs.

× The cars is much much much popular than public.

✓ Cars are much more popular than public transportation.

When comparing two things, use the comparative form more popular, followed by than. Much can be used once before the comparative for emphasis: much more popular. Repeating much is unnecessary.

× I think that the cars is much much much popular than public.

✓ I think that cars are much more popular than public transportation.

When speaking about cars in general, do not use the definite article the before the plural noun cars. Use cars. The noun public transportation can also be used without an article when referring to the general service.