自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答过去的经历时要使用过去时，因此将“Yes, I do”改为“Yes, I did”。“put to school”表达错误，应使用“rode my bike to school”。另外，“spend my time”和“be proud of my courage”与语境不太自然。建议先直接回答，再补充骑车的频率、用途和感受，并减少重复和停顿。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I rode it to school almost every day. It was convenient, and I felt independent because I could travel around my neighborhood on my own.

建议: 回答的主要观点很明确，也提供了共享单车这一具体例子，但“flights”应改为“bikes”，“everywhere in the street”更自然的说法是“everywhere on the streets”。注意使用复数形式“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing apps”，并通过“for example”和“because”连接观点与原因。最后可以补充骑行方便、环保等具体原因，使答案更完整。

示例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in China, especially shared bikes, which you can find all over the streets. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient, inexpensive, and environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题询问的是“when you were a child”，指过去的时间，所以回答应该使用一般过去时。将“do”改为“did”。

× I love my bike that I really put to school every day to, uh, spend my time.

✓ I loved my bike, and I rode it to school every day.

描述童年时期的经历时，动词应使用过去时，因此“love”改为“loved”。此外，“put my bike to school”不符合英语表达，应使用“rode it to school”表示“骑车去学校”。

× I love my bike that I really put to school every day to, uh, spend my time.

✓ I loved my bike, and I rode it to school every day.

原句中“that I really put to school”结构不完整且表达不自然。可以使用并列结构“I loved..., and I rode...”来清楚地表达两个动作。回答口语题时，应避免把多个意思混杂在一个不完整的定语从句中。

× It's a good way to, for me, uh, too proud of my, uh, courage.

✓ It was a good way for me to feel proud of myself.

这句话描述的是童年时骑自行车的经历，所以“is”应改为过去式“was”。另外，“to proud”不能这样使用；“proud”是形容词，需要搭配“feel”，形成“feel proud”。

× Absolutely yes, flights are everywhere in the street, you can see it uh, we also have an app for uh, sharing the bikes uh, it's prevalent in China.

✓ Absolutely, yes. Bikes are everywhere on the streets, and you can see them. We also have an app for sharing bikes, and bike sharing is prevalent in China.

表示“在街道上”通常使用介词“on”，所以“in the street”应改为“on the streets”。“on the streets”比单数形式更适合表达街道上的普遍情况。

× Absolutely yes, flights are everywhere in the street, you can see it uh, we also have an app for uh, sharing the bikes uh, it's prevalent in China.

✓ Absolutely, yes. Bikes are everywhere on the streets, and you can see them. We also have an app for sharing bikes, and bike sharing is prevalent in China.

“Bikes”是复数名词，因此不能用单数代词“it”指代，应该使用复数宾格代词“them”。同时，第二个“it's”指代不清，改成“bike sharing is”可以明确说明“共享单车很普遍”。

× We also have an app for sharing the bikes.

✓ We also have an app for sharing bikes.

这里说的是一般意义上的共享单车，不是特定的一批自行车，所以通常不使用定冠词“the”。应说“sharing bikes”。

× Absolutely yes, flights are everywhere in the street, you can see it uh, we also have an app for uh, sharing the bikes uh, it's prevalent in China.

✓ Absolutely, yes. Bikes are everywhere on the streets, and you can see them. We also have an app for sharing bikes, and bike sharing is prevalent in China.

原句把多个完整句子用逗号连接，形成逗号拼接错误。应使用句号分开句子，并使用“and”连接相关分句，使句子结构更清晰。

× You can ride it anytime if you want.

✓ You can ride one anytime if you want.

这里的“one”表示“任何一辆自行车”，比“it”更合适，因为前文没有明确指出某一辆特定的自行车。“it”通常用于指代已经明确提到的单数事物。