自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答内容直接，包含了自行车的颜色、获得年龄以及父亲限制你骑车的原因，细节比较具体。主要问题是语法和搭配错误：应说“a black bike”，而不是“a black”；描述过去的习惯时，应使用过去时“took”和“made”，而不是“take”和“make”。此外，可以使用“because”和“so”清楚地连接原因和结果，并避免重复使用“when I was a child”。

示例: Yes, I had a black bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about seven years old. However, my father thought riding on the road was dangerous, so he often took my bike away and made me ride only in our yard.

建议: 回答没有完整表达观点，最后停顿并中断，缺少具体原因和例子。注意“bikers”指骑自行车的人或骑摩托车的人，本题应使用“bikes”或“cycling”；“enjoy the choose to”是不正确的表达，可以改为“choose to drive”或“prefer to use cars”。建议先明确回答“是”或“不是”，然后用“because”补充一个具体原因，例如交通便利、汽车普及或城市建设了自行车道。

示例: I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young adults. Many people use them to commute because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. In addition, some cities have built dedicated bike lanes, which makes cycling safer.

× Yes, I had a black when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a black bike when I was a child.

“black”是形容词，不能单独用来代替名词“bike”。应在形容词后面补充名词，说明具体是什么东西。建议记住：形容词通常需要修饰名词，例如“a black bike”。

× But my father didn't like me riding it on the road because he thought it was dangerous, so he often take it away and make me ride only in our yard.

✓ But my father didn't like me riding it on the road because he thought it was dangerous, so he often took it away and made me ride only in our yard.

这段话讲述的是童年时期的过去经历，所以“take”和“make”都应该使用过去式，分别改为“took”和“made”。注意：在同一个过去时间背景中，并列的动作通常要保持过去时。

× I think, uh, the bikers aren't popular in my country, uh, because today more and more people, uh, enjoy the choose to, uh.

✓ I think, uh, the bikers aren't popular in my country, uh, because today more and more people, uh, enjoy choosing to ride bikes.

“enjoy”后面通常接动名词（动词-ing形式），不能接“the choose”。因此应将“choose”改为“choosing”，并补充完整的动作“to ride bikes”。常见结构是：enjoy doing something。